I've decided to post the first part of Super Six in its entirety for my fans and readers to check out and give feedback. Super Six (the novel) is divided into three parts, and I'm posting Part One for you to read. You are welcome to just read it for fun and torture yourself until the rest of the book is finished and published, or you can download it and treat it like you are an editor and leave your thoughts and feedback for me to use in future drafts.
The best way to do the latter option is to download the word doc below, mark "Track Changes" in Microsoft Word, and then email me the finished product when you are done. You can email me at psionbeta@gmail.com
If you impress me enough, I may even ask you to become a Beta reader for me, which means I'll see if you want to read my novels and offer good, helpful criticism and commentary to help me polish up my novels. A good Beta reader offers more help than just say "Wow! Loved the book!" Or "This really wasn't for me." They go into specifics about things they liked, things they didn't like, and try to figure out what bothers them.
Keep in mind that this is still the 2nd draft of Super Six, so it's not terribly polished and there may be mistakes. So you are certainly welcome to catch that kind of stuff like grammar, spelling, punctuation, but it's not required. I'm looking more for what's working and not working as you read the story.
I've included PDF and Doc formats.
Happy reading!
The best way to do the latter option is to download the word doc below, mark "Track Changes" in Microsoft Word, and then email me the finished product when you are done. You can email me at psionbeta@gmail.com
If you impress me enough, I may even ask you to become a Beta reader for me, which means I'll see if you want to read my novels and offer good, helpful criticism and commentary to help me polish up my novels. A good Beta reader offers more help than just say "Wow! Loved the book!" Or "This really wasn't for me." They go into specifics about things they liked, things they didn't like, and try to figure out what bothers them.
Keep in mind that this is still the 2nd draft of Super Six, so it's not terribly polished and there may be mistakes. So you are certainly welcome to catch that kind of stuff like grammar, spelling, punctuation, but it's not required. I'm looking more for what's working and not working as you read the story.
I've included PDF and Doc formats.
Happy reading!
| super_six_first_third.pdf |
| super_six_first_third.docx |
RSS Feed
